1st Poem

This is my 1st poem at deviant art
Literature, Poetry..u will love this part
its words are easy not like drawing a flow chart! .


This my 1st time to log in
My Account is one there is no twin
In DeviantART.. here is my Career begin


Is my words are good for a new write
Tell me Ur opinion without making any fight
Am I using wrong words or using right?

Should i leave and turn to fly a kite
Or i stay to make success to open my own site
Oh there is light

I'll see a comment by this night
OH..I'm wrong..there is no bright
Deviants making a comments Diet !

I'll have comment only by my friend
copy and paste it...it is kind lend
Just press Enter...please press send
There is no more....it is the END


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I'm waiting 4 u r opinions